Review Detail of oceansage in Madara in the Avatar World

After reading till 17th chapter, I have mix feelings about this ff. First of all, writing quality of this ff is great. Author has done great job there. What really make me pull out my hair is how nonsensical the scenarios are, and how anyone can teleport anywhere. Let me explain, 1st, mc spawns at air temple, and first thing he thinks of, is to save iroh's kids, who by the way are part of fire Nation army, just because he has seen iroh on TV. 2nd, he traveled to kiyoshi Island by riding on a fish's back, purely by accident, like they are neighbors. And to top it off, kiyoshi village suspect a f*cking 8 years old kid of being a spy, to the point that it's village head even wants to interrogate him. 3rd, author described beifong family like it's the only rich and influential family in the world, like even the fire Nation as a whole is beneath it. What happens is, after leaving kiyoshi village, mc attacks fire nation outpost for the sake of money. But after amassing enough personal funds, he happily agrees to work for beifongs. What's even more retarded is that, mc said "its idiotic to offend beifongs", but he is completely alright to have offended a whole f*cking nation. 4th, toph escaped from her home and went all the way to foggy swamps in just 3 days, as a 4-5 years old BLIND KID. By the way, mc himself took a week for the same journey. 5th, fire Nation soldier start attacking a lost 4-5 year old blind girl. Why? f*ck logic that's why!