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Elixer_Yuu
Elixer_YuuLv22yr
2022-06-26 20:11

this book has a lot of potential, like, a lot. starting from the narration to the pacing of the story- everything is worthy of a read. the only issue is the occasional change in the tenses, they spoil the flow. but those are probably minor mistakes done by the author, they can always be edited after a re-read. looking forward to your success, author.

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_jessitayylorAuthor

Thank you so much! My consistency with the tenses is a work in progress. This means a lot coming from the author of one of my favorite books here in WN!

Elixer_Yuu
Elixer_YuuLv2

oh my, fav book? I m honoured, miss

_jessitayylor
_jessitayylorAuthor

Yes! My notifs are on in case the next update comes out :)

Elixer_Yuu:oh my, fav book? I m honoured, miss
Elixer_Yuu
Elixer_YuuLv2

thank u so much

_jessitayylor:Yes! My notifs are on in case the next update comes out :)
_jessitayylor
_jessitayylorAuthor

You're welcome 😊

Elixer_Yuu:thank u so much
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