Review Detail of Notion_Theory in Martial RPG

the story picks up by chapter 4 and that's when it begins to shine. the mc is smart but not the generic smart guy type, he has character to him and in some way reminds me of senku from Dr stone. the structure and Grammer of the book is really good and consistent, the paragraphs are short and easier to digest and follow, and the word that's being built in the story has a lot of promise and expectations for the future. good work on the story author this was a good read and I hope you keep up with the good writing.