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Background_CharLv102yr
2022-06-23 10:26

The Author is back at it again! Writing quality is fairly well with easy-to-understand structures and harmony of words. I often find myself picturing whatever scenes very vividly. The protagonist is one of the pragmatic types that does everything with a justification while able to take risks to grow stronger. The premise is interesting where the protagonist gains a "game-like" system that allows him to do everything an RPG character does including saving checkpoints that can only be reloaded after death(The protagonist, however, has a limited amount of lives, which he obtains from the quest, etc.). Updating stability is very firm, which I like, and the world background seems to be the typical Murim style with the cruel nature standing out more. I would recommend giving this a read and finding out if it is your cup of tea.

Martial RPG

S_Takeshi
4.7
15 Chs

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S_Takeshi
S_TakeshiAuthor

Hello potential readers! The story might have a rather slow pace at the start but I assure you it will get better in the later chapters. The MC is rational and somewhat bold enough to undertake paths that can improve his strength. Sadly, the RPG system given to him isn't invincible, the MC will still die and he cannot instantly exponentially grow in strength. He must strategize and struggle to survive. I would say MC is neither righteous nor evil, but he is selfish. There might be romance but there will not be a harem. I hope you enjoy reading this as much as I enjoy writing it. Thank you for reading!

2yr

Deathilim_609
Deathilim_609Lv13

The writing is decent. The emotions feel raw and alive, while the descriptions are simple but easily understandable. Story Development - Still chapter 4, but there already is a story going on. The story seems interesting and unique. Character Design — Hard to say. 4 chapters are not really enough to know if the other characters are good or not, but I can assure you that the MC is good. Updating Stability — Enough said, look up his other works and you will see they update fast. World Background — Typical murim, idk whats special yet since its only, 4 chapters. Good luck Author-san!

2yr
UnreliableJones_
UnreliableJones_Lv2

WritingWithJones has transformed into ReviewingWithJones! The writing is superb, I didn't see any typos or grammar mistakes. The action is also well-thought out. This novel is still very recent, and I have no idea what the author's release schedule is. The story has just started out, but I imagine it will be interesting. (This is also my first time reading an Eastern Fantasy Novel) Character design is really nice. (I can't explain it really in depth) The world background is also a new thing for me, but it also feels very interesting! (My first time reading an Eastern Fantasy Novel)

2yr
Eclipse_Ranger
Eclipse_RangerLv3

this is my 3rd book I am reading by the author and man he does it well everytime this book MC is good not naive kind MC system seems well thought out, world building is awesome I some time feel I can see what I am reading now I feel like I should say its S_Takeshi so it must be good

2yr
ZenByMoonlight
ZenByMoonlightLv5

The pacing feels rushed, or maybe it's just me that liked slow-paced stories better. I could feel that the story was written from the heart, but it could be better with help of an editor. You might want to read (and steal) techniques to write dialogue from other writers. All in all, I have fun reading. (≧◡≦)

2yr
JDice
JDiceLv14

(Chapter 1-10)Good setup and story so far. I see the inspiration from “Murim RPG Simulation” and “Reaper of the Drifting Moon”. Looking forward for more chapters.

2yr
Destroyerofbeings
DestroyerofbeingsLv1

Are there no new updates? Why did you stop at the climax of the plot? [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2yr
Kineticmeanenergy
KineticmeanenergyLv1

Good story. Please continue! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2yr
Notion_Theory
Notion_TheoryLv1

the story picks up by chapter 4 and that's when it begins to shine. the mc is smart but not the generic smart guy type, he has character to him and in some way reminds me of senku from Dr stone. the structure and Grammer of the book is really good and consistent, the paragraphs are short and easier to digest and follow, and the word that's being built in the story has a lot of promise and expectations for the future. good work on the story author this was a good read and I hope you keep up with the good writing.

2yr
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