It's actually a really good story and incredibly well built so far. My only gripe is that it's the very definition elongation a story for the pennies. The chapters by themselves barely tell you things, like it's so incredibly slow, but once again, it doesn't detract from the fact that it is a very good story. I would still recommend it and am still reading it.
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You are mostly right, I feel like some chapters are too short and plot barely progresses as well, but that's only because I am extremely busy and I try to write as much as I can in my free time. I don't get any money from this novel, so I can't sacrifice my work time. I can only write these chapters by sacrificing my own free time. Don't get me wrong, I might have sounded a little bit... offended? (I'm not sure if that's the word I'm looking for lol), I was just trying to explain my curcumtances. Anyways, thanks for the review.
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No no it's okay I do understand. Like I said I'm not trying to detract from the story because it is actually a very good story and premise. Yes there are clichés but it's done pretty tastefully. It was just an observation and review but once again I do very much enjoy reading the story.