The idea is good but please give disclaimers if this is just MTL or you're the author and you're using a translation machine to translate your work or you're just editing a MTL.

This is all good and all, but even after all these chapters he posted there is still no sign of captain Marvel…honestly that’s wha I came here for he is the husband of captain marvel right? The setting takes place years before, make a time skip or something come on man

Interesting story, but I came here looking for Captain Marvel, but too my surpise, no Captain Marvel, even to 55 chapters, like really man, I only put three stars because of the sheer disapointment, I had when I realized Captain Marvel was not in this story, I will type another review when I see Captain Marvel.

i like the Story. read 40 chapters an i think this is a realy good idea behind this [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]

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No Captain Marvel! Like bro where is Captain Marvel? No where near this story that’s for sure.

Don't mind me, I'm just balancing all the free rating the bots gave the author for this NTR trash

I've never laughed so hard at a fanfic… the paragraph comments are wonderful.

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i really wanted to try and read it because is seemed to be a decent concept but it was so badly translated that it honestly kinda hurt to try and understand it , like i think when he randomly "Roars" he meant like sighs or something like that and from what i have seen of other reviews they are saying something similar or just doing five stars and typing random stuff, for the fun of it, so please just don't read.