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Earl_McClain
Earl_McClainLv111yrEarl_McClain

I'm going to give you an actual review, I've read all the chapters so far. It's .. OK , nothing ground breaking, but not bad either. IMO I feel as tho the pacing could be a little faster, & please stop the repetitions of scenes, you'll stay the same thing multiple times, one major thing .. it gets boring.To much info dumping, your action isn't enough & fairly less detailed than it should be, & Seriously the MC being low key is an annoying troupe, & really isn't necessary, truthfully most of these problems could be solved by him just showing his skills, but the "Peaceful life" bullsh** that he speaks is stupidity, you can have a peaceful life , in a world without magic, let alone one with it. This could be better & I hope it does get better

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Author's Reincarnation in a Fantasy Setting

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Earl_McClain
Earl_McClainLv11Earl_McClain

(Can't)

moon_senpai
moon_senpaiAuthormoon_senpai

Well, thanks for the review. I was wondering what is that many readers are upset with but now I can see it. I'll try my best to improve so that you, and all the other readers can enjoy the novel.

law_of_lowkey
law_of_lowkeyLv3law_of_lowkey

lowkey mc? hehehe im in

law_of_lowkey
law_of_lowkeyLv3law_of_lowkey

harem?

moon_senpai:Well, thanks for the review. I was wondering what is that many readers are upset with but now I can see it. I'll try my best to improve so that you, and all the other readers can enjoy the novel.
moon_senpai
moon_senpaiAuthormoon_senpai

there's no harem, at least not for the real MC.

law_of_lowkey:harem?
Tee_hee
Tee_heeLv4Tee_hee

webnovel readers are concerned more about looking cool rather than plot or grammar. I'd advice you to not listen to webnovel reviews 97% of times.

moon_senpai:Well, thanks for the review. I was wondering what is that many readers are upset with but now I can see it. I'll try my best to improve so that you, and all the other readers can enjoy the novel.
Fredy_89
Fredy_89Lv2Fredy_89

definitely should listen to your readers if their means tend to make your novel better 👍

moon_senpai:Well, thanks for the review. I was wondering what is that many readers are upset with but now I can see it. I'll try my best to improve so that you, and all the other readers can enjoy the novel.
Neilyn
NeilynLv14Neilyn

tf u talking about mate? a lot of us concerned about the plot and grammar too. if the plot and the grammar is bad, what's the point reading the novel?

Tee_hee:webnovel readers are concerned more about looking cool rather than plot or grammar. I'd advice you to not listen to webnovel reviews 97% of times.