Review Detail of s0mble in Author's Reincarnation in a Fantasy Setting

After reading this story so far I can tell that this story has potential to become very popular on this site. The story is very interesting and the main character has a very good role in the story not evil but not good either which is what I prefer in a MC. The uploads are good, the Author responds to questions, and the other characters also have a role in the story. overall I would give this story a 8.9/10 it just needs a little work but I will say this again this story can become big and I hope others enjoy it as much as I do.