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2022-07-05 20:21

I've given 4 in writing quality 3 in story development and chara design update stability is 5 and world background is 3. now the reason loosely saying character are mostly soulless protagonist have so low reaction to turning zombie as if he ro it weekly. there are various points reminding me of same stuff used in manhwa like the return to the player, the system is as always a generic pulling point but at this point this is me personally being saturated from system and believing there are many great stories out there on WN and reading those makes this work slightly or maybe considerably fall short. the character so far lack dimensions to them, skittle looks ur template over scared one from zombie movie. and to be honest it lacks in building the required tension one would expect when zombies are involved. all the said I wish you'll do well author, all the best for the contest. I'll be reading this if I get bored of some other goods

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