Review Detail of Bierbart in Primogenitor in Marvel

Dont know if the author deletes bad reviews or... Writing quality is good and updates are consistent so far. story development was interesting until shortly after meeting carol. The whole hypocrisy play with getting her kidnapped and then going "woo me... i could have prevented that. Poor carol feel bad and i have to suffer living with that but all for the greater good" would make dumbledore fans proud. Add to that a rather random Adoption and spoiling said daughter with mostly slice of live elements derailed it a lot. Dunno if it will get better again but currently at chapter 24 i guess i will have to drop it. characters seem rather linear and simple with rather rushed character interactions and the relationshipdynamic. No problem if relationships may develop fast and you dont have to wait 100k words for some romance or friendship bit currently the character development is at most slightly above the love at first sight lets marry trope. Might work with mind control ina slightly darker work but here its just random