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Skaviouz
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Yeah I remember reading this long ago, someone else added all 169 chapters (It's actually only 99 chapters, but some of these chapters have more than character limit that webnovel restricts for each chapter, such as chapter 13 with 22k words) and they did this 2 years ago. It goes by Eroninja on this platform and they even labeled/named each chapter, I would recommend that if you are going to reupload it (because you say you are the original writer of this fanfic) I would suggest making sure the title for each chapter is not just labeled chapter 1/chapter 2/etc. Second suggestion would be maybe spellcheck, like try out MicroSpell, you use "Danzou" 503 times, but Danzō is commonly just spelled Danzo. I know many people that spell ō as ou and many who just drop the u. You even spelt Hanzo without the u, so Danzō should get the same treatment with his name...

Naruto: The Erotic System

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Oh, thanks for the suggestion! I will look into it. As for the chapter title...since you know that the original length of each chapter is quite large thus I will have to number it accordingly with around 5-10 chapters based on the same name...which I have observed interferes with the algorithm of the website thus decreasing its reach. Rest, I will try to apply the changes for the spellings that you have mentioned...Really appreciated :)