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Beardy
BeardyLv152yr
2022-12-05 14:29

Definitely worth the read, it’s good so far and pretty easy to follow. There is a couple of areas of concern though… or maybe it’s just me overthinking it. It’s not straying too far from the plot though, only time will tell if this is good or bad. The women in the group make good leaders, well I’m guessing that is supposed to be Revan, the women have the final decision though. This is fine in some cases but they really shouldn’t undermine him in front of people. It seams as the the Harem isn’t 1 man and multiple women, the women appear to be pretty close too... I’d bet that it eventually goes yuri. Overall, it’s pretty good so far and I will continue to read it. Nice work author.

Revan Returns

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crazyspecter
crazyspecterLv14

good wroting solid plot but there are 2 game breakers for me: first the author making a pos move by avoiding adding the yuri to the tags; second there is a harem that is not an harem because aside from yuri the harem is pretty much cowned by one of the female who almost are more interested in women than men to the point of not sleeping with the mc if no woman is around and asking alone time with one of the love interests. The fact that the author deceived the readers instead of being clear with his tags is not somethin I like. Despite the hateful behaviour of the author I cannot denay the good writing quality and solidish plot despite for the plot sometimes the author have his mc act superficial and too arrogant by understimating some things that could cause troubles

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IWant2DieALilMore
IWant2DieALilMoreLv14

I am really loving this story so far. Hopefully it doesn't follow the movies to closely, but major changes are always welcome...............

2yr
CephJester
CephJesterLv2

Very entertaining so far! The writing quality is good, and I can't really find anything to genuinely complain about. 5/5. The stability of updates seems good, especially with the length of the chapters and comparing it to other stories that decided to drop or go into hiatus. 5/5. Story development to me has seemed well-paced, and engaging. 5/5. Character design is 5/5. It's entertaining to see the characters interact and have some relation to their canon counterparts. And world background is likewise a 5/5. There's enough information to let us know where they are and what is going on, or what has happened, but just enough to leave us in obscurity for certain situations to push the story along.

2yr
Pilotfranco
PilotfrancoLv13

It’s a good idea but I think that the execution was poor. you might think differently idk but I found it to be a chore to read so I stopped. I’d recommend you try it to see how you like it first before drawing a conclusion.

2yr
Slushy_Apollo
Slushy_ApolloLv15

Book is an easy 5 stars until the author changed it to complete smack in the middle of the story and hasn’t really said anything about it

1yr
testerer
testererLv11

This brings sooo much nostalgia of things i wish i could do in the Knights of the Old Republic game. I really hope this isnt dropped, its a really good fan fic so far, really really good.

2yr
Daoist7FKTu7
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nunya_business_3493
nunya_business_3493Lv4

I have enjoyed this story. Thank you very much for writing it. Its difficult to find good Star Wars stories where the MC isn't a raving murder hobo on a mission to screw everything that walks.

2yr
Faveryy
FaveryyLv13

It's been a while since I've dug out a star wars fanfic as good as this one is. I'm loving the crew's chemistry and the direction the story itself is taking. Quality is great overall. My only qualm is the update speed, but as someone who used to write regularly, I get the pain of trying to keep a regular schedule with this sort of stuff I'm enjoying this very much. Keep it up!

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