Review Detail of Santy_Melay in I'm Spider-Man (MCU)
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The novel is good but I have some things to say: to start at this point in the story Peter should be immune to bullets, at least to low-caliber ones, which sometimes lengthens the fights unnecessarily and unrealistically within the same universe, some avengers such as thor or hulk were also left out, they appear but so far they have not fought as avengers, Pietro and Wanda, Doctor Strange, things are happening too fast, we are about to enter the spider -verse and Peter is still in school, and considering the timeline and that it all starts in 2010, it shouldn't happen, and even though Peter can alter the timeline due to his intervention, it seems to me that the author is aware of it. past.
I'm Spider-Man (MCU)
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at least for me it's just like he forgot all the Mc's personality that was biuld in those past 300 chapters in the actual chapter, the description of his emotions and actions are not even close to the chacter that he builded in the past, I judge it because I red this fanfic without an pause in those past days, this is somehow frustating seeing the Mc become almost child like with all the things he already acomplished, like in his fight against kingpin, why was he acting like he didn't already killed hundreds of beings, acting all emotional like killing one more person that deserved would be something new in his life.