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Review Detail of Brandon_Geo in I'm Spider-Man (MCU)

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Brandon_Geo
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This fanfic is your typical mass produced, cheap and bland Marvel story. It has the same problems that many fanfics have in this site. The only difference here is that this fanfic is popular. -The fanfic doesn’t care about the source material: This fanfic is only a MCU story because it gains traction, and it is very popular in webnovel.com. -The MC doesn’t have any personality: He doesn’t even feel human. He is only there to keep the story forward. He literally just runs with the flow of the plot. -Show, don’t tell: If the MC is bland like Morvius then “show, don’t tell” because it is hard to read so many words when you don’t care about the protagonist when he is the whole focus. -Power fantasy done bad: I get it. Writing and reading power fantasy are fun but you need to try to don’t fall to the many cliches that exist out there. Sadly, this fanfic does exactly that. Bashing, OP main characters, protagonist is always right and gets everything easy. I really hope the author doesn’t delete this review because this isn’t a hate review. This is truly, just a review from someone with a different opinion.

I'm Spider-Man (MCU)

AlienWarlord

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AlienWarlord
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I don’t delete Low rating reviews that actually give comstructive reviews. only the ones that don’t write anything but insults or nothing at all.

AlienWarlord
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AlienWarlord:I don’t delete Low rating reviews that actually give comstructive reviews. only the ones that don’t write anything but insults or nothing at all.
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AlienWarlord
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Also, I delete one star reviews. because I know my writing Is better than that.

Xouldrion
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This man right here is a God that is like 20 chapters ahead of everyone, I mean there hasn't even been a single fight scene and yet he already knows that MC gets everything easily. I swear this man must have Tungsten in his pants 24/7 to gain this level of omnipotence...

Justsome_nobody
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Hey if you have pirated version of this novel or you getting some chapters ahead tell me i so want to read ahead because as i can see when you wrote the review there were only 7 chapters out?

Dao_of_Lazy
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AlienWarlord:Also, I delete one star reviews. because I know my writing Is better than that.