Writing quality 5/5: I have found no problems with the writing: Story development 3/5: As of now (45 chapters) i really cant get a grasp on the story, the first 15 or so chapters were a prologue that really wasnt needed as of now, maybe we will discover more in future. Once the real story begins we get a bunch of flashbacks on mc past but we dont see a real explanation for the present. I will probably change my rating after more chapters come out, the story is still in a sort of introduction. Character design 3/5: same thing where I will probably change my rating after more chapters come out. As of now the character feel basic and average but thats normal since they still havent been properly introduced. World background 4/5: seems interesting but we havent got any explanation about it. Overall review: The book is promising i suggest you read it even in its current state, since its better than 99% of the books you find on webnovel.
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thank you for your honest feedback. It's hard to keep up writing, when you don't know, what the people think of your book.
