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WorthyAdversary
WorthyAdversaryAuthor2yr
2022-06-25 12:52

This is the author's shameless review! The first 10 chapters will be setting up the background for the story so that there are no plot holes, so try to stick with the story until after the first 10 chapters before dropping. If you guys find any mistakes, just comment on them and I'll fix it in a day. Thanks for reading! Also, if you guys have any questions, just reply to this post and I'll answer them as early as possible, I just won't reveal any spoilers.

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ZacK1456
ZacK1456Lv3

is it harem?

Akros_Zero
Akros_ZeroLv4

Amazing story, just one problem Mc is being simp, not for the little Hope since I can see you wanted her to make a good subordinate so that's quite good, but about her older sister, according to the story she left her after caller her a neet, but here are you making them rankers, can you at least kill her or torture in any way, I am fine him being friendly with her younger sister but if he goes saving his Older sister despite the fact she betrayed him then add the tag shonen Protagonist since the fact that he goes saving her sister who abandoned her doesn't sound good to me, only his younger sister deserves that. I just hope you get on the Older Sister in some way or at least make her realize her mistake for what she did with the Mc.

WorthyAdversary
WorthyAdversaryAuthor

Yes, right now, I'm thinking 4, but that might change. And just saying, I'm a supporter of pure harem, so don't expect girls to be throwing themselves at MC and MC accepting, I will only write harem where MC and FL's actually build up their chemistry first.

ZacK1456:is it harem?
Akros_Zero
Akros_ZeroLv4

Never mind, just ignore half of my previous comment since in chapter 41 I finally got to know the truth of the betrayal, and my all anger vanished, just confused whether his sisters know that the new brother they have is original or not.

WorthyAdversary:Yes, right now, I'm thinking 4, but that might change. And just saying, I'm a supporter of pure harem, so don't expect girls to be throwing themselves at MC and MC accepting, I will only write harem where MC and FL's actually build up their chemistry first.
Azathoth2
Azathoth2Lv4

Please add harem tag in the novel

WorthyAdversary
WorthyAdversaryAuthor

They don't, they have no idea he's eve a brother at all

Akros_Zero:Never mind, just ignore half of my previous comment since in chapter 41 I finally got to know the truth of the betrayal, and my all anger vanished, just confused whether his sisters know that the new brother they have is original or not.
WorthyAdversary
WorthyAdversaryAuthor

Later, when something actually happens, not gonna have him in love yet, can't, because I hate harems too and am putting that off to the latest as possible

Azathoth2:Please add harem tag in the novel
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