Review Detail of Brian_Hanes_117 in Her One Smile

The story is written well, the updates seem steady, it progresses excellently, the characters are interesting, and the background is solid. It is truly unique and told in an innovative fashion. There are some minor issues but nothing that greatly takes away from the read. The generally prefer more description of what characters look like and what the setting is like in romance novels. I will give it a pass this time for my rating because I enjoy how smooth and concise the chapters are here. On the other hand, one thing I will take away from slightly is that the story tense shifts a bit during a couple of points in the story (from past to present). It doesn't happen much and I have done the same before as an early author. But anyway, this is an entertaining book that you can easily get hooked to. I'll definitely keep it in my collections and give it a power stone if I remember.