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Aminopavono80
Aminopavono80Lv141yr
2024-06-11 03:49

hey there, I actually found this story because of the deal with ben 10: ultimate predator's update requirement, I was just going to leave a few comments without actually reading the story just to get new chapters for ben 10, but the more I read this story I got so engrossed in it that i forgot to leave comments 🤣 but seriously author if you're reading this, i love your works and have actually added many of them to my library, and this became one of my favorites as well, my only complaint would be the info dumps but iIdon't really mind. thank you for your hard work, keep it up ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Lunatic Dragon

That_One_Dead_Ali
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7 Chs

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BahamutKingOfChaos
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So, people have been saying the mcs too strong, but it's been teased that there are people stronger, like way stronger than the Mc and some people like Natasha. The world building is quite good but could be better and the characters are quite interesting along with skills and whatnot. I love that the author goes quite deep into explaining the skills and / or the world and characters. I wish the author updated more consistently, but I enjoy each chapter once it's been released. that's why it's not 5 stars, but other than that, I highly recommend the book it's been a very good read.

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Troy34
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Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engagers I would like to discuss something with you that will help the engagement of your book

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Haise_Sasaki1
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It's fine but there is so much info dump every single chapter it gets tedious to read.

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CHEON_MA
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daniel_rahn
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So Far i love the concept and development, i need to read more to see how it is, but if it is like the other Authors Fics then im sure it would be good, one of the few non harem novel and one of the original novels that probably doesn't have any unnecessary drama over the main Couple, not to mention its free unlike other original novels that doesn't worth the shot, so definitely you should give it a try

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Dhsvd_Bybd
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I won't beat around the bush this is a good story worth reading, the characters are good the MC is also likely.

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The_Stone_Age
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I enjoy reading this book; the plot is engaging, and the main character isn't instantly overpowered, though still strong. While there are some plot holes, no story is perfect. These minor flaws don't detract from the overall quality, and I find this novel thoroughly enjoyable.

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ZombiePat
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just want more chaps on the Ben 10 ff, I will probably start this at somep poin though🥲

1yr
BahamutKingOfChaos
BahamutKingOfChaosLv11

I'm wondering what happened to this series it used to have a whole lot of chapters, and yet most disappeared, and now only 7 are left please author don't tell me you dropped this series! Right when it was getting really good, too. I'm gonna go cry in a corner and pray that I'm wrong.

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