Item: The Dragon King's Chosen Bride
Rating: 2.6
Author: Mia_L_Wolverton

Mia_L_WolvertonLv141yr

2023-02-09 19:45

very poor grammar and the story didnt make sense at times.

The Dragon King's Chosen Bride

Phinix

4.6

507 Chs

Liked by 2 people

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AT_ImaginationLv4

Thank you for the review. This book is largely based on mystery, which might be why you find it confusing. About the grammar, I am certain that the book is readable, sure it needs a little editing here and there, and I will certainly get to that. Also, it gets better the more you read, the latter chapters are more edited than the earlier ones. Thank you once again for the review.

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