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assassin101
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2023-01-28 12:46

welcome all. just to let some know this story has been rewritten. which is a bit surprising to me, last I read the story was more so of mc going back to his world and fighting the apocalypse with the summoning system, now tho it's become mc making a dungeon himself. I'm quite interested to see where this goes, after all the old story was very good before. let's see if you can put do yourself author

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