It's a promising beginning. The author takes a very interesting approach with first person narrative where the protagonist's personality seeps into the narration and monologue so much that one is forced to wonder just how reliable of a narrator he is. Then, as the world and the story slowly keeps unfolding, more and more of is characterization comes to forefront by simply him narrating and reacting to things or commentating on a piece of history. He is, by far, the strongest part of the narrative, and we still don't know where his story is going but I've already become invested in the ride for sure. Overall, a very good main character-driven narrative. Keep up the good work!
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