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2023-02-03 09:07

After reading 79 chapters, I found the story mostly annoying and frustrating before I had to just put it down. Do you like a main character that leaves loot on the ground and refuses to look out for himself because he expects the author to hand him what he needs when he needs it? Do you like a main character who refuses to bathe or wear anything but blood covered rags because he prefers to look and smell like swine? do you like main characters that get good weapons handed to them but refuse to use them and just punch everything? Do you like a main character that shows all his enemies his secrets, but will irrationally keep secrets only when it hurts his own opportunities just because. Do you like an MC whose "cultivation" is only described as visualizing a demon head? Not a joke. That's it. I don't. I feel personally insulted. Er Gen has put in minimal effort on this one. I think maybe Er Gen fed an AI a bunch of cultivation novels, and this is the novel it vomited out.

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Tsetth
TsetthLv14

Sounds like a dope book to me, better than the ones with forced harem I've seen being mass-produced recently.

KumoLoversClub
KumoLoversClubLv14

there are tons of girls. but the mc is suffering from dense protagonist syndrome

Tsetth:Sounds like a dope book to me, better than the ones with forced harem I've seen being mass-produced recently.
Banana_Joe_4877
Banana_Joe_4877Lv11

sounds like you expect a kid who doesn't know squat about the world. to know what's best and not. he's just a kid trying to survive, he learns from mistakes and get better. your definitely someone who likes watching the MC get cucked

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