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Review Detail of Horizon in God's Path: I Can Create A Lot Of Cheats Through Mutation

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At this point, the novel is just about his relationships and the $ex with his harem, with other stuff as side dressing. Like the author has spent more words describing how beautiful or how great the harem members smells/feel, than he does on the actual plot and events in recent arcs. I feel that there hasn’t been one arc where the author goes for more than 5 chapters without mentioning the MC and the harem doing something in bed. it’s tiresome and lazy. the good plot progression that was originally happening has slowed down to a crawl for this boring relationship diary on women who fell for the MC seemingly overnight and have the flimsiest relationship/chemistry. Another thing I dislike about this book is how the author fell into the same cliched habit of turning his character into this mute automaton. A lot of authors destroy their characters by making them be this silent person who rarely speak if it’s not face slapping. Like they think it’s cool to not speak and just have all the MC dialogue be his thoughts. If anyone acted like some of the MCs I’ve seen, including this book, people would think that they have some autistic traits. it’s just a boring lazy trait that makes MCs feel like cardboard robots that simply react to what’s happening around them without any drive or motivations outside of the most basic “get strong, protect harem”

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God's Path: I Can Create A Lot Of Cheats Through Mutation

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