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00Mark
00MarkLv11yr00Mark

A kid mc? what's up with this new trend of writing kids with incarnated souls as the main characters? what's the appeal behind this trope? I would've liked to give this novel a chance but kid mcs are instadrops for me, can't deal with mcs being constantly underestimated because of their body or having their cultivation slow down because "muh body isn't developed, i can't breakthrough! muh foundation!"

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Leave Me Alone, Heroines!

ClashingBlades98

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Krayz
KrayzLv10Krayz

You and any other author who write r18 story with MC as a fucking kid and had sex at young age are just degenerates. and you are 17? Boy go to you fucking school and learn literature moron. All i see here is that you are a horny kids all day long fantasizing child porn

ClashingBlades98:sigh, thanks for the insult. just because I wrote some imaginary stuff that will never happen and that i don't accept, I became sick. bruh, you are too soft for this world if some book made only for entertainment would scar you this much. just leave bro, I can't be bothered to even argue with you.
ClashingBlades98
ClashingBlades98AuthorClashingBlades98

Well, thanks for your review but I will try to fix your misconceptions in it. first of all, my MC is indeed a kid. But, he won't have any kind of shortcomings from it throughout the story, no lack of body growth, no slowing down of getting stronger, nothing of that sort. Second of all, this is not a cultivation book so your second point is also wrong. Anyway, don't consider this as a persuasion to read my book or anything like that since I always say to readers that if you don't like it then don't read it. I will also leave this review. Have a good day :)

UncleDodger
UncleDodgerLv11UncleDodger

bandit who already explored in this forest 99 times only get killed by kid mc. man, kid mc are dangerous!

Fellbane
FellbaneLv11Fellbane

The sick part of it is that you have grown women (in their 30’s) that are romantically obsessed with the child MC. One of them even kisses him in an extremely uncomfortable way. The MC is 10!!!! You are literally sèxuàlising a child for over 100 chapters (which is where I stopped reading btw). If you wanted to write a novel about adult relationships and twisted yandere romance, why did you make your MC a child? I don’t understand why so many authors are into this genre recently, maybe that is what does it for them nowadays. Unfortunately, it just makes me uncomfortable.

ClashingBlades98:Well, thanks for your review but I will try to fix your misconceptions in it. first of all, my MC is indeed a kid. But, he won't have any kind of shortcomings from it throughout the story, no lack of body growth, no slowing down of getting stronger, nothing of that sort. Second of all, this is not a cultivation book so your second point is also wrong. Anyway, don't consider this as a persuasion to read my book or anything like that since I always say to readers that if you don't like it then don't read it. I will also leave this review. Have a good day :)
ClashingBlades98
ClashingBlades98AuthorClashingBlades98

Bruh, it's a fantasy. a fiction. I am not doing a crime am I. if it's not your cup of tea than just drop without says anything. You should already be aware of this fact from the first 2 chapters.

Fellbane:The sick part of it is that you have grown women (in their 30’s) that are romantically obsessed with the child MC. One of them even kisses him in an extremely uncomfortable way. The MC is 10!!!! You are literally sèxuàlising a child for over 100 chapters (which is where I stopped reading btw). If you wanted to write a novel about adult relationships and twisted yandere romance, why did you make your MC a child? I don’t understand why so many authors are into this genre recently, maybe that is what does it for them nowadays. Unfortunately, it just makes me uncomfortable.
Fellbane
FellbaneLv11Fellbane

No, it’s not a crime. It’s just really weird and uncomfortable. You’re a grown man right? Then why are you writing a novel that sèxuàlises a pre-pubescent boy? It sounds really weird when you read it like that doesn’t it? Have him grow up before you include stuff like that because again, its super weird!!!

ClashingBlades98:Bruh, it's a fantasy. a fiction. I am not doing a crime am I. if it's not your cup of tea than just drop without says anything. You should already be aware of this fact from the first 2 chapters.
ClashingBlades98
ClashingBlades98AuthorClashingBlades98

if by grown man you mean I am some 30 year old guy than no. I am 17..second of all, as I said, if you hate it just drop. I can't care any less if you don't really like what I write. iit's your preference and I respect it. there are other people who like reading this genre since it is nothing but a fiction. nothing like this will ever be real.

Fellbane:No, it’s not a crime. It’s just really weird and uncomfortable. You’re a grown man right? Then why are you writing a novel that sèxuàlises a pre-pubescent boy? It sounds really weird when you read it like that doesn’t it? Have him grow up before you include stuff like that because again, its super weird!!!
Fellbane
FellbaneLv11Fellbane

I would consider 17/18 to be an adult, yes. The genre is sick and you’re sick for writing it. Imagine if it was the other way around. A 30 year old dude gives a smothering and decidedly not platonic kiss to a little girl younger than 10. Suddenly, that doesn’t sound so fun anymore, does it? Just because the protagonist is male, that should not matter, it is the same thing in principle. It’s just wrong.

ClashingBlades98:if by grown man you mean I am some 30 year old guy than no. I am 17..second of all, as I said, if you hate it just drop. I can't care any less if you don't really like what I write. iit's your preference and I respect it. there are other people who like reading this genre since it is nothing but a fiction. nothing like this will ever be real.
ClashingBlades98
ClashingBlades98AuthorClashingBlades98

sigh, thanks for the insult. just because I wrote some imaginary stuff that will never happen and that i don't accept, I became sick. bruh, you are too soft for this world if some book made only for entertainment would scar you this much. just leave bro, I can't be bothered to even argue with you.

Fellbane:I would consider 17/18 to be an adult, yes. The genre is sick and you’re sick for writing it. Imagine if it was the other way around. A 30 year old dude gives a smothering and decidedly not platonic kiss to a little girl younger than 10. Suddenly, that doesn’t sound so fun anymore, does it? Just because the protagonist is male, that should not matter, it is the same thing in principle. It’s just wrong.
mow
mowLv4mow

Thanks for the warning, I guess this falls under shotacon or whatever which is just uninteresting.

Fellbane:The sick part of it is that you have grown women (in their 30’s) that are romantically obsessed with the child MC. One of them even kisses him in an extremely uncomfortable way. The MC is 10!!!! You are literally sèxuàlising a child for over 100 chapters (which is where I stopped reading btw). If you wanted to write a novel about adult relationships and twisted yandere romance, why did you make your MC a child? I don’t understand why so many authors are into this genre recently, maybe that is what does it for them nowadays. Unfortunately, it just makes me uncomfortable.
Hunter_BEAR
Hunter_BEARLv2Hunter_BEAR

some of the novels that are made are actually in the realm of the author's imagination, where the author gets an idea suddenly and makes several other arrangements before making it into a published story, so, sometimes, even though there are some readers who don't like it and insist, the authorsometimes it can't be that easy to change the story, because, in addition to imagination and ideas that come suddenly, some writers also have a future concept of the story, even though the concept is still vague. I salute the author of this story, although many readers complain, but still continues the story to hundreds of great chapters. If only I had more free time, I would also like to continue my own story like this writer. good luck.

ClashingBlades98:sigh, thanks for the insult. just because I wrote some imaginary stuff that will never happen and that i don't accept, I became sick. bruh, you are too soft for this world if some book made only for entertainment would scar you this much. just leave bro, I can't be bothered to even argue with you.
razor_hunter
razor_hunterLv2razor_hunter

17 isn't an adult just wanted to let you know

Fellbane:I would consider 17/18 to be an adult, yes. The genre is sick and you’re sick for writing it. Imagine if it was the other way around. A 30 year old dude gives a smothering and decidedly not platonic kiss to a little girl younger than 10. Suddenly, that doesn’t sound so fun anymore, does it? Just because the protagonist is male, that should not matter, it is the same thing in principle. It’s just wrong.
Sinful_Cyanide
Sinful_CyanideLv15Sinful_Cyanide

Thank you for the review, knowing this novel is focused on ped0philia helps me make my decision about whether or not to read it. Author should really put a disclaimer about that in the synopsis.

Fellbane:The sick part of it is that you have grown women (in their 30’s) that are romantically obsessed with the child MC. One of them even kisses him in an extremely uncomfortable way. The MC is 10!!!! You are literally sèxuàlising a child for over 100 chapters (which is where I stopped reading btw). If you wanted to write a novel about adult relationships and twisted yandere romance, why did you make your MC a child? I don’t understand why so many authors are into this genre recently, maybe that is what does it for them nowadays. Unfortunately, it just makes me uncomfortable.
Dabhussy
DabhussyLv3Dabhussy

when will the mc become and adult/teen? Or is he going to be 10 for the whole story?

ClashingBlades98:Well, thanks for your review but I will try to fix your misconceptions in it. first of all, my MC is indeed a kid. But, he won't have any kind of shortcomings from it throughout the story, no lack of body growth, no slowing down of getting stronger, nothing of that sort. Second of all, this is not a cultivation book so your second point is also wrong. Anyway, don't consider this as a persuasion to read my book or anything like that since I always say to readers that if you don't like it then don't read it. I will also leave this review. Have a good day :)
G1LGAMESH
G1LGAMESHLv13G1LGAMESH

Don't argue with english people, unless you want to turn into their eternal slave tea maker.

ClashingBlades98:sigh, thanks for the insult. just because I wrote some imaginary stuff that will never happen and that i don't accept, I became sick. bruh, you are too soft for this world if some book made only for entertainment would scar you this much. just leave bro, I can't be bothered to even argue with you.
PaperTiger
PaperTigerLv13PaperTiger

Appreciate the heads up on this one.

Fellbane:The sick part of it is that you have grown women (in their 30’s) that are romantically obsessed with the child MC. One of them even kisses him in an extremely uncomfortable way. The MC is 10!!!! You are literally sèxuàlising a child for over 100 chapters (which is where I stopped reading btw). If you wanted to write a novel about adult relationships and twisted yandere romance, why did you make your MC a child? I don’t understand why so many authors are into this genre recently, maybe that is what does it for them nowadays. Unfortunately, it just makes me uncomfortable.
HoS_Yatta02
HoS_Yatta02Lv2HoS_Yatta02

Let the author write whatever he wanted.No one is forcing you to read it. So what if you don't like it! it's not like the author will stop whatever he/she is writing just because you don't like it. Instead of complaining and telling the author that you don't like the genre or the content of the novel do something more productive and make a fair review. IT'S A FICTION!! OK It's a product of people's imagination it's not like the author is commiting a crime. Everyone is free to do whatever they want as long as it's not a crime. AND don't bother to reply to this cuz I won't be reading it I don't have the energy to deal with people like you. (What's the point of reading fictional novels if you'll treat it as reality, Go out of your house and enjoy your life instead of complaining here)