Review Detail of ZABbbbbb in EDEN LOCKER 'S MAGUS SYSTEM {I-XI} And THE BLACK CREST FAMILY

The story is awesome! There are many stories which have the same betrayal and time travel thingies but this is an original. I liked it and was thoroughly engrossed. There is a need for proofreading but other than that, the story is very fine. Would definitely recommend it to others. There is however one thing that confused me. From the first two chapters, it is abundantly clear that the MC Eden knew of the Chains of Dedra, which from this chapter has something to do with torture and the release of a super powerful dude. So, if MC Eden travelled back in time, how did he not know the existence of these three men who are out to capture him? Hmmm.... I think there is some clear mismatch here and would like author-san to correct it. Anyway, I wholeheartedly think this is an honest mistake and wouldnt pay too much mind to it. Author-san, best of luck and please dont stop writing.