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ClearSkySage
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2022-11-09 09:29

“This, this is teacher’s Dragon Emperor Demonic Rupture! Elder brother is able to use this soul skill. No wonder he did not want to use his fifth soul skill when he sparred against us. It’s actually the Dragon Emperor Demonic Rupture! With Sovereign’s Descent as its foundation, and with the Golden Holy Dragon martial soul as its source, it’s able to destroy everything! Furthermore, it will evolve as one’s cultivation improves. It’s a powerful soul skill representative of a true Titled Douluo, or even a Transcendent Douluo, or even an Ultimate Douluo!”

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