Review Detail of SpicyChickenWriter in The shadow of dead.

The story is interesting overall - a different concept that l think is very eye catching. But l have to agree with other reviews that the style of writing really needs to be changed. I don't really understand the story and it took me re-reading it several times to finally get the gist of everything. But on the other hand, l can tell that english is not the author's first language so for this level writing, it's already good. Improvements would be just engaging in large scale editing to ensure the flow of writing is better.