great concept with vivid details that allow one to get fully immersed into the story. The pacing seems appropriate for the length of the novel so far and I think it has huge potential!

fantastic story and good characters.....in this story I really like the novel recommended for others👌👌👌❤❤....and it's interesting....the description vivid and it's like you are dragged into the story as you read each line of the book..all in one novel...

The story is certainly unique. It gives off a different vibe from many I've read. If I'm correct then I believe it's somewhat intertwined with the Indian gods. I'll review step by step below: Synopsis: One of the best aspects of the book but I believe it contains just a little too much information. Add a few more sentences and it would look more like a prologue than a synopsis. You should keep this concise and to the point. Writing Quality: Honestly, the grammar is okay but the organization and punctuations are far from perfect. Sometimes you use quotations to dictate dialogue then sometimes you don't. That's very confusing. You should choose one of the two and stop moving between them. There was even an instance or two where you started sentences with quotations and the Hun the closing quotation is nowhere to be found. Story Development: One of the stronger points of this book. It has more of a slow build but that's fine if done correctly which I believe you have the skill to do. Overall: The author has potential and while it isn't a terrible book, there is still space for great improvement. The paragraphs were too crowded, punctuation usage could be better, and some parts were quite confusing. But don't give up. Fix these errors and your book could turn into a masterpiece. Good luck author!

I can say ,This is a Masterpiece .[img=recommend] Story development ,characters, writing styles and it hooked cover ...everything is superb 👌. Great work author.keep going.

Okay. So the story seemed to have an immersive plot, which is wonderful as it quickly draws you in. The one problem that draws you out of this immersive-ness would be the inappropriate use of punctuation and the lack of overall sentence blending. Everything else seems great so I'd be keeping an eye out for updates. If the author corrects the disjointed sentence problem then that would be even better.

While the premise is interesting, the author could improve more on grammar and sentence structures. I spotted many words that were merged together as an example. And a few dialogues got stuck in the same paragraph. I suggest you install Grammarly. It helps in constructing sentences and giving us suggestions. I only use the free version so the benefits are limited. With more practice, you can write better and better. Best of luck, author!

Your writing style is well-written which has its own uniqueness. Although you need to work on the punctuation and your grammar will improve some day. Don't give up and keep up the good work, author :)

The story is very charming, it hooks you and you keep waiting for more, I want to see what will happen, I like the characters, they have a touch that characterizes them.

nice story l must say.... uur ritting skill is also great.... keep going author... this story gonna lead you to a big success ... my best wishes is with u...

hello there. After going through the story, it became clear that is different from what I have read, in a good way because has a unique touch to it, it has relatable characters and that is a plus for me. The book has potential, some misplaced punctuation and grammar that can be fixed and but there is room for improvement, because this is a gem. I totally recommend people to read it.