Review Detail of Fachi in DC: DON'T UTTER A WORD

The writing quality is great as always, however the story is incredibly boring. The character's IQ also seems to be incredibly low, very simple ideas and concepts are completely overlooked. I don't know what to say, the story just doesn't have much going on with it, I enjoyed CORNBRINGERS other stories but this one is just pretty bad. Making someone with Black Bolt's powers is somewhat interesting but but it's ruined by the lack of truly interesting events and all the god awful angst that plagues the story. And, because I know people are going to say things like "But-but the character is having realistic reactions for his situatio-" I don't care. Honestly having things like that is fine, but it plagues the story, there is more angst than plot, and just and fyi, angst isn't entertaining. And anyways I didn't come to a webnovel fanfiction to ponder the human condition on a topic that many others have explained in a much better and more detailed way. Nothing really happens in the story, I feel more action from a slice of life story. I think everyone sucking on CRONBRINGER's cob is actually harming his writing, he writes something and then everyone sees a new novel praises him, and THEN reads the story. Another thing, this really reminded me of a Warhammer 40k + Young Justice fanfic called Death Korps of Justice, it just has a lot of similarities, though I will have to say it's more entertaining. I am not trying to be mean, I just want to give constructive criticism to a author who doesn't really get any.