Review Detail of Juice_9768 in DC: DON'T UTTER A WORD

It's ok I guess. The premise is exciting, but the story overall is just kinda meh. It is pretty edgy and the character interactions don't feel natural at all. In addition like 60% of the sentences are incomplete and the author uses periods where they should be using commas. Makes the story read in a very jarring manner and the story itself wasn't good enough for me to look past that. Has potential though I guess.