Review Detail of ChaosZ in Leveling Endlessly with the Strongest System!
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At the time of this, I’m on chapter 303 and I just got to say that this story is fantastic. It has great writing quality, two chapters a day, and you can tell the author has put a lot of thought and planned out the story well. I love the background of the world and how Crimson is shaping it out to be. The MC is pretty standard for the most part but I do like his personality and how he isn’t very ignorant, dense, and overall is smart and thinks things through. Although he does go overboard with the system and doesn’t really bother to hide his insane growth which I don’t mind because personally I like how he doesn’t hide his prowess. Side charcters could get some more development imo but Crimson could be saving that for the future so I don’t have too much to say about that yet, plus the MC is going through a heavy growth period rn so it is understandable. All in all I recommend the read and I personally think the power system is pretty cool and how it’s set up for further development down the line.
Leveling Endlessly with the Strongest System!
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I know there's a reason. I was just wondering cuz he wrote the cure down and now like 40 chapters later still nothing has come of it.
ChaosZ:He gets fit and there’s a reason that he his fat
So you know he gets fit so what’ the problem? Does the mc being fat bother you that much? Just enjoy the story
Michael_McNulty_3403:I know there's a reason. I was just wondering cuz he wrote the cure down and now like 40 chapters later still nothing has come of it.
what bothers me is paragraphs being wasted on them talking about what he looks like. it's the same as people constantly praising the MC in other novels just reversed. it's a waste of words.
ChaosZ:So you know he gets fit so what’ the problem? Does the mc being fat bother you that much? Just enjoy the story
It simply represents a reality lol, who wouldn’t talk about some huge 500lb guy walking around, same with an overly handsome guy. Its part of the story, if you get bothered by stuff like that just either ignore it and continue to read or drop it. No one’s forcing you
Michael_McNulty_3403:what bothers me is paragraphs being wasted on them talking about what he looks like. it's the same as people constantly praising the MC in other novels just reversed. it's a waste of words.
can you just tell me around what chapter? cuz if I have to keep skipping though paragraphs it would be better for me to drop it. I thought the story was great other than this. I just don't want to read through over 150-200 chapters, where whenever he's in public a couple paragraphs are wasted talking about what he looks like.
ChaosZ:It simply represents a reality lol, who wouldn’t talk about some huge 500lb guy walking around, same with an overly handsome guy. Its part of the story, if you get bothered by stuff like that just either ignore it and continue to read or drop it. No one’s forcing you
78 if you want to read where he starts making the thing to cure him, around 90/91 for after he finishes transformation
Michael_McNulty_3403:can you just tell me around what chapter? cuz if I have to keep skipping though paragraphs it would be better for me to drop it. I thought the story was great other than this. I just don't want to read through over 150-200 chapters, where whenever he's in public a couple paragraphs are wasted talking about what he looks like.