Author I’ll be genuine with you it’s your story and it’s up to you how to write it but sometimes listen to your readers a bit after all you are writing for people to read. Ok now for my critique on this why are we almost at chapter 500 before he even awakens? First of all your update speed is maddening and slow and it seems like we need to wait for ages for it and then the story seems fast yet slow at the same time fast in the sense a lot has happened a lot of info fights lore and background but slow in the sense that it’s update is bad and the this guy is just reaching the capital at chapter 500 its really frustrating after all someone like me spent several months waiting for chapters if i did that with other novels I’ll have a lot but with yours I barely got up to 100 chaps honestly wish you would work on your update speed and not drag out some stuff too much I thought after waiting for months and saving up to 100 chapters he’ll awaken but he just about to start trial 1 smh. And not like I don’ appreciate the op abilities he has gotten along the way and the fights but I still feel like you could’ve cut up anywhere from 80-100 chaps of excess info and story dragging and the story would be good still or even better
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