Review Detail of AntiLoliLewding in Reborn as The War God

Well, I suppose I have to dip my hand into the barrel, once again. Truth be told this fic isn't bad in the sense that it's unbelievable, well, at least most of the times, but it still proves to be making you feel dissatisfied. For starters, God forbid that there would be a correct "I'm", no no no, it's always im, simplistic little issue to mitigate, just a single tap of autocorrect away, but no, it's not fixed. This is the first of the gripes I have. For the story, fast-paced, understandably he's a deity, time flies when you live for eternity til you've lost the faith of the people. But by God, if you truly wished to give respect to Bryant, you could have made it a bit more seamless, instead of outright making Ares look like a schizoid. The constant issue of pointing out references, by yourself if I may be frank, is kind of a quality drop. We understand you've slapped them in cuz haha it's funny. The character. Oh the character. I get it, he's supposed to be the cool, murder guy that doesn't give much of a shit and gets the gains all ez, no cap or whatever the fuck the new people say, and I understand, the newer novels nowadays are all femboys or fekkin manhwa MC copy-pastes. And I get why he didn't want to be getting so close to Aphrodite, she's the etymological origin for so many fucking fetishes that it's just painful to watch. But again, if they noticed that he was acting a bit more peculiar than normal, they would question his gifts of divinity, wondering if he was misplaced by the fates for something different. The update stability is possibly the only redeeming factor, being often enough that it wouldn't be a hassle to write and give quality, while allowing you to have enough time to think for yourself, good on you for taking care of yourself wordsmith. And the background, there's much to be said, but it can be summarized cleanly. It's mediocre, oftentimes rather a droll experience. We've had this song and dance before, and mish-mashing a bunch of titles and people doesn't innately increase the quality of what you're making. It's almost the same issue with harems and all that song and jazz. Too many people, and too little quality. Overall, 3.2 out of 5.0, this is a major fixer-upper of a fic. This is off my chest and out of my say now. Have a decent day, wordsmith.