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demigod0414
demigod0414Lv42yr
2022-12-17 17:07

In general.Its good, but you should write dialogues separating characters speech with a new passage.And don't to interfere characters words in one pile.Its confusing.

Jujutsu kaisen :The Forgotten Sorcerer

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