Review Detail of toocareful in 1234321

Item: 1234321
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toocarefulLv141yrtoocareful

What's the point of the whole reincarnation thing without memories. There is no contribution to the plot. He can't remember events or know impeding threats. The story sounds good and I'll still be giving it a read. I hope it will exceed expectations.

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paulspy_fn

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toocarefulLv14toocareful

????? So why have a past life at all. There no point for reincarnation. Just make a regular oc.

paulspy_fn:With how powerful his power is there is no threat to him at all. And u made it without memories so there can be no connection ti his past life and I don't see why he even needs them

1yr

paulspy_fnAuthorpaulspy_fn

With how powerful his power is there is no threat to him at all. And u made it without memories so there can be no connection ti his past life and I don't see why he even needs them

1yr

paulspy_fnAuthorpaulspy_fn

I needed a reason go give him those powers and it was just something I wanted.

toocareful:????? So why have a past life at all. There no point for reincarnation. Just make a regular oc.

1yr

finalgetsugaLv1finalgetsuga

Still dumb couldve just made it like that its a story anythings possible but you satting him to be rencarnated makes the readers wanna know about his pass but oops since he cant remember anything then its just uselses

paulspy_fn:I needed a reason go give him those powers and it was just something I wanted.

1yr

finalgetsugaLv1finalgetsuga

keyboards not good

finalgetsuga:Still dumb couldve just made it like that its a story anythings possible but you satting him to be rencarnated makes the readers wanna know about his pass but oops since he cant remember anything then its just uselses

1yr

paulspy_fnAuthorpaulspy_fn

well I didn't really think it was that important but I guess it was sorry

finalgetsuga:Still dumb couldve just made it like that its a story anythings possible but you satting him to be rencarnated makes the readers wanna know about his pass but oops since he cant remember anything then its just uselses

1yr

CONCUSSIONARMYLv4CONCUSSIONARMY

I agree with too sorry, there is no point in reincaration without memories, if you dont want him to know mha plot just make him be from a world without mha/anime/technology in general.

1yr

DongLongLv4DongLong

Should be moved to ff section for recognition

paulspy_fn:With how powerful his power is there is no threat to him at all. And u made it without memories so there can be no connection ti his past life and I don't see why he even needs them

1yr