Review Detail of Mew_Alop in Alien in a world of magic

my main thing about this is the perspective I prefer a first person type but the concept was too good to me I'm a big fan of alien stuff because of that your book is nice there could be more detailed description on the senses for the mc as to really drive home the unique biology of a alien I would like to point out I'm not that educated in literature so take it how you want but pls don't stress about the book you do you and keep it up very nice so far[img=update][img=recommend]