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VoxEnozian
VoxEnozianLv31yrVoxEnozian

I feel very mixed about this WN. It's got a fine premise, and it executes it finely too. The story progression happens swiftly. The world has a fair bit of detail to it. The characters have decent amounts of characterization. But for everything positive, there is something negative to either hold it back or diminish the effect of the positive. Grammar barely exists, Omega might have actually erased the existence of punctuations from the world, idk. All of the story development and characterization I said is nice, happens in a very cookie-cutter fashion. The world has detail but it's all thrust upon your face at once without any flavor. I suppose this one could just be that the author is targeting those who are familiar with this genre and have been similar world building. That may have been why he didn't spent too much time on it, since these are things they have already seen in other stories. I'll give the story and the author the benefit of doubt on this one, actually. Overall, it's not for me is all I can say. It didn't give me anything to hold my interest. Sorry, but different strokes, I guess.

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Dragon God's Reincarnation!

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Alex_lucifer
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thanks for the review, I'll try to improve on the aspects you have pointed out

VoxEnozian:have *seen similar world building. sorry.
VoxEnozian
VoxEnozianLv3VoxEnozian

have *seen similar world building. sorry.

VoxEnozian
VoxEnozianLv3VoxEnozian

Don't think too much about it. It's just that I couldn't get into the story. If you feel like anything I said was a valid criticism, then sure, work on it. But for things that you feel are fine to you as they are, don't bother too much just because of a review. It's necessary to have your own vision for the story as the first priority. Keep up the good work.

Alex_lucifer:thanks for the review, I'll try to improve on the aspects you have pointed out