Item: The Undying Mecha Emperor
Rating: 4
Author: divinrth

divinrthLv132yr

2022-08-03 05:13

so i’ve read about 20 chapters, my current impressions are that it’s pretty interesting and good. the premise is intriguing, not personally a fan of the mecha grading system and the world background, but they’re not bad it’s just a personal dislike. the only thing i dislike strongly about this novel is how it’s written. i’ve always had a dislike towards novels that are weitten from the perspective of the future, in this case the mc 10 years into the future narrating everything. it’s very hard to write properly, and it’s just grating sometimes even if written properly. the 4th wall is almost constantly broken, and there’s a lot of foreshadowing which kind of kills the intrigue. again, this is more of a personal gripe, but judging by another review i saw, i’m not alone. i won’t be continuing the novel due to it, but from what i’ve read so far and by judging from other reviews, it’s a promising novel and entertaining.

The Undying Mecha Emperor

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