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Lizrock
LizrockLv42yr
2022-06-16 22:42

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Dragon ball: Signed for ten years, refused to join the pride team

Copia_San
1.6
210 Chs

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lodalele
lodaleleLv1

Literally unreadable. The translation is so bad that I can feel brain cells dying. Also it is typical Chinese novel with idiotic names and scenes that are just pure trash.

2yr

Copia_San
Copia_SanAuthor

as it says in my profile i only use google translate to translate the novel I have not modified the characters or fixed the place About this novel I only found 208 chapters

2yr
LordSatan666
LordSatan666Lv14

Break down of the story the Grammer and writing quality is abysmal only translated by Google then copy and pasted into webnovel (or at least that's what it seems) character design best description is op updating stability all the current chapters posted in 3 days with no editing to make them even remotely intellectual to read world background I'm not sure if the poster even knows beyond the barest essential knowledge beyond memes as if they did they would have changed the story to be enjoyable but when all these mtl novels are mass reuploaded on different sites they aren't translated properly in general

2yr
Epaxx
EpaxxLv6

Use grammarly or any other app/site that could improve the overall grammar of the story, it's unreadable, you could push through it but it would burn your remaining braincells piecing words together.

2yr
eroskun
eroskunLv1

I'm tired of this. It's unreadable. There's no story development because there's no actual story. It's all punch, gets hurt, says "I'll show you my strength", then get puch again, then "the real battle starts now" and then repeat and repeat. It's an endless teasing battle of more than 10 chapters. And that happens with every battle. So annoying

5mth
RemoteRomance
RemoteRomanceLv4

Completely unreadable trash tier chinese fic that was translated with google translate and was never checked over. The author clearly hasnt read his own translation and reponds to all negative comments with what he thinks is a smug quip but in reality shows his absolute lack of effort and inability to respond to criticism.

1yr
Topo_15
Topo_15Lv4

Horrible. ......................................................................................................................................................................................................

2yr
God_Reece
God_ReeceLv1

If i have to rate this novels mlt translation I'll give 2/10 to this one, it's really hard to read even for a mlt. I mean just in the 1st chapter it's already unbearable The Mc is the typical brain dead type who keeps shouting system is a pig 😷

2yr
LazyAuthorXReader
LazyAuthorXReaderLv4

where can i read the chinese raw? ...............................,............... ...............................,...............

2yr
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