Just another author honoring the code. If you want to give this fic a try, first thing to know is that the first chapter might not react well to some people due to me trying hard at being philosophical while I was high 🍀, so it's better if you skip that move one to the next one. The chapters that follows are just me as a newbie author trying to set a pace which ended up on chapter of monologues and a little action which rounded everything up at CHAPTER 15, so if you want to read it, try sticking around for the first 20 chapters before dropping. it's a slow burn romance, yes, no harem, with Ororo Munroe as the main love interests. Please keep your minds unbiased as you read through to get what I think is my vision for a fulfilling reading experience.

its a decent fic to pass the time. but there are some shortcomings in my personal view. like how utterly uninteresting the "antagonistic forces" are. or how reading a mc run around playing fix-it hero just cuz the world might end gets old quickly. world ending threats are a normal tuesday in marvel and reading a mc try to prevent all of them just feels bland and unnescessary after a while. and the last like 20 chaps all felt like fillers where the mc either monolouges, fights boring battles or is stressing over different threats. This fic has a lot of good qualities too. and i wouldnt be so critical of it if I was invested in what was happening. but ever since the start of the sentinel arc my reading experience went from "i cant wait to read what happens next" to "this arc feels boring and unnescessary, when will it be over" With all this said. My respects goes to the author for writing a story that feels like it has a lot of effort and thought put into it. I wouldnt even be able to come close to writing something close to as good as this

The story has a great start but that's it. The main character is not only weak, but his powers are not even unique. all he does is monologs everything, I don't want to read that. I also don't want to read a science text book on a FANFIC!! I get that your doing that so you can develope his powers more but you don't have to be so persice with the language of explaining it. The story pacing is all over the place and sometimes I even get lost on what action he did on somedays. The main character personality is subpar at best, nihilism+naivety does not equal a good character, that's called lazy writing, even through the story and he got rid of his naivety it still got worse cause now he overthinks everything wich contributes to the problem of monolog. There are more monologs than an actual story, there is no progress at all. The last problem is that the author reads the comments and sees criticism, which he does reply to, but doesn't even try to fix them, it would be better if he actually considered criticism in the story. Look I can tell you put a lot of effort and time into the story and I admire that but if you can't take a look at the criticism and can't see a problem in your writing, you can't become a better author because your overlooking the flaws.

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it's too complicated, too much details, too much Philosophy. and the same thing goes on for long it is not realistic.

reviewing at chap 19 why you should not read this fic •mc is not super strong begin •if you don't want lot of unknown background char in fanfiction why to read •mc is not super power in beginning •mc char devlopment is very good •new plotline you need to wait till chap 18 for next stage author gives suprise ,like mc dad but it didn't create any exciting. but looking at given situation, i guess, it's ok overall i like this fic

This story was a cicle of me not undertanding why people were unreasonably mad at the author... and myself being unreasonably mad at the author lol But overall pretty good story, I dropped the first time I tried to read because I didn't like MC's personality but that changed real quick when I came back to give it a second chance You could literally skip like the first 2 or 3 chapters and it wouldn't change anything, or in my opinion, it would make it even better

good story. Not OP but has the potential to be very strong. would have given this 5 stars but you give some Marvel characters too much credit. looking forward to more and Hope the HYDRA hunting goes well.

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