Review Detail of Mr_Babbles in The Proselyte's POV
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I have mixed feelings about the writing, I am on ch 9 and I don't think I understand half of everything I read, because although it looks like good grammar it is deceptively bad, it's structured weird and mistakes are in places where if you read out loud its just wrong, I can't gloss over mistakes in writing, I'm not that kind of reader, the dialogue and quips mc says most of the time I have to read 6 times over to make sure I understood what he was saying, but other than that every character I've seen has a distinct personality, the world although not told in much detail, is very big, and things seem to be happening though I don't understand it
The Proselyte's POV
TempoLane
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Thank you for the review! You're pretty much pointing all of the issues that I have with this book lol. Ngl, this just a fun writing submission but the early part of the story irritated me in the same way. While I can rewrite most of it, my work took the majority of my focus and I'm kinda lazy to fix something that I didn't focus as much anymore. The deceptively awful grammar issue is one of the core reason. Mostly because it has been a long time since I wrote anything in English, meanings and sentence structure is kinda butchered throughout the way. The fact that I only have two hours to write per day doesn't help. The book's quality will stay as it is, but I take the pointer as a resources for my next project. Thank you for giving this book a chance! I'm surprised that you didn't set the rating lower.
TempoLane:Thank you for the review! You're pretty much pointing all of the issues that I have with this book lol. Ngl, this just a fun writing submission but the early part of the story irritated me in the same way. While I can rewrite most of it, my work took the majority of my focus and I'm kinda lazy to fix something that I didn't focus as much anymore. The deceptively awful grammar issue is one of the core reason. Mostly because it has been a long time since I wrote anything in English, meanings and sentence structure is kinda butchered throughout the way. The fact that I only have two hours to write per day doesn't help. The book's quality will stay as it is, but I take the pointer as a resources for my next project. Thank you for giving this book a chance! I'm surprised that you didn't set the rating lower.