This story is extremely well written and I can tell a lot of effort has been put into building the world and MC. There are very few grammatical errors due to the author actually caring about the readability of his novel that you don’t typically see in other novels of this level. The author is actively taking suggestions from his readers which contributes to how well the story reads. One thing that I believe the author does well in this novel is keeping the flow of the story consistent and reliable. I think the main contributor to this is the fact that the author plans out events ahead of time, outlining key events and chapters before writing them to connect seemingly insignificant details that you might look over to events later on in the story that would have played out much differently.

My communication with my reader base is especially lacking. I put this here for those with suggestions and take joining the discord server as too burdensome. Please highlight areas of improvement and suggest unique ideas. I promise to respond. ^_^ Of you're expecting a review, it's in the auxiliary Chaps, along with the link to my discord server.

A well written story that clearly has a great deal of thought put into the world and the characters living within it. I have thoroughly enjoyed the clever plots and schemes as well as some of the combat and I find myself anticipating future events. It pains me that this story remains relatively unknown. I will follow it to the end.

the book is a fun read up until the Grand scheme the it's became something else then the story stopped became stagnantto be exact 91 chapters still in the jungle. the Mc is still 5years old, the 2weeks grand scheme is no boring but not fun to read either the author overdid it too much it became tedious. the switching of characters to much that it can take more than 8 to 10 chapters without the actual Mc being in the picture only his schemes. overall this is a scheming novel through and through from the looks of it it I'll continue for a very long time readable though no doubt but to much schemes at some point becomes boring 💤 real quick.

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A very good story with high potential. Writing Quality is among the top 1% on this platform and story development in what I read (till chapter 8) is simply superb. The way the author set the background journey of MC and defines his character (before rebirth) while developing of MC's character in the new journey (after rebirth) was executed magnificently. Simple but it was impactful.

novel has a lot of potential,grammar is good, and has a good basis for later, but so far I've been very frustrated as the novel gives me a lot of detail I rather find unnecessary, with multiple pov switches sometimes a chapter. I also am really not a fan of exploring the plot with a child mc for to long with which the novel so far has set us up for. The mc himself has a lot of room for growth which is good but as stated it seems like we'll be in his childhood years for awhile which really is gonna hamper that. Overall this novel is a novel that is gonna grow into itself but for me personally is gonna be one left to develop before I invest more of my free time into it.

From what I read, this story is fine. The writing can be a little too conversational rather than literary, but some of the descriptions are interesting. However, some of them I found to be needlessly overcomplicated to the point where it becomes hard to follow and less compelling without re-reading. The world building of this story is good, I feel like I would enjoy this more if the writing was more straightforward and unpretentious.

Don’t read this novel, the author loves to advertise on other people’s works.

This started off good but too many pov switches literally mc barely appears and the author drags side character arcs for no reason