Everything was good, but the writing quality was slightly off to me. The style, breaking the 4th wall slightly gives an odd taste. I don't know how to explain it more, but I couldn't see myself being immersed into this type of style. However, I tried until I got the sense of it. I encountered a small number of grammatical errors.
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