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2022-10-17 03:01

it started rly strong, for a second i thought im reading the last chapter. there are typos but the story and characters are very good overall.

The Cosplay

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4.6
55 Chs

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emaan_Hussain_2035
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Thank you very much do read it till last

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Devesh_Kulkarni
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since I'm also an author I know how hard it is to write as many details as possible in a sentence while describing things. and honestly, this is the part I struggle with the most. but you have done a great job with details and descriptions of things. you have used various words as well while writing. The story keeps me interested and doesn't feel boring. so far so good

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Livylivalive
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The details in this novel is astonishing. There is a realisticness that is hard to emulate in samuel’s character. It’s been a while since I’ve read this book, but there is always a feeling like something bigger is going on. An mc that is thrown into the hearts of event. If you like detailed mystery, this book is for you!

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Its a great story, I really enjoyed the emotional detail and characters. A good read highly recommend.

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Hilda_Zi
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I love how mature the lead character thinking and the way he flips his emotions. The way he adapted to the cruel reality is just its 'wow'.He showed how deep his feeling was. Applause to the author

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Moonamore
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I wrote this review after reading the first ten chapters. So far, the best thing about your book is how beautiful the description is. You describe everything really well. The lead character’s moral compass is interesting, and he is mature. The building of mystery with a little hint from each chapter was a great point too. There are several errors that could make the story a bit confusing, but overall your book is enjoyable.

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OnlySupremeOne
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This novel is very good brother. You describe very good with various words. Your way of using punctuations are a little bad. But they could be improved through grammarly check. Your story kept me entertained so far. Keep up!

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Good world background A dark world setting And plots and scheming characters good

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CRYSTAL_9374
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I actually liked it. The way you expressed the chapter 1 was awesome. I think some parts have cliffhanger which makes it more interesting so that a person can read it with more interest.

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NobleRemmy
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the synopsis was interesting. it triggered me to read the book... Intriguing beginning I couldn't help but to wonder what could have happened.

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