Item: Brain Fog Effect
Rating: 5
Author: Khadija_Mayo

Khadija_MayoLv12yr

2022-10-22 18:14

It has a distinctive plot. I honestly believe that the writer has a strong sense of creativity. The story is well written. I therefore won't say much. Overall, I believe it to be a fantastic idea with lots of potential. If you enjoy romantic drama, check out my most recent novel and leave a review.😋 "The one who stole my first kiss"

Brain Fog Effect

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