just read the first 20 chapters. I don't like how he starts off with the most powerful weapons in the world. The story is progressing too fast with almost no character development. story is very bland and somewhat unoriginal. would not recommend.
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LIKEWhat makes a story feel unoriginal isn’t that it has certain tropes but that it isn’t expanded on enough and the characters aren’t interesting. If the characters are shit and there are little / no original ideas the you are left with a bunch of tropes -> unoriginal
Reacix:Just going to say this off the bat, but no story, no matter how complex or simple the story is, is considered “original”. For an example, a vampire story, one could have a vampire romance, and try to make it as original as possible, but it won’t be simply because thousands upon thousands of people maybe millions before them have made a vampire romance story. All one can do is make it unique, give the character a unique power, look, and so on that is different from the others. So calling this an unoriginal novel applies to every novel in existence besides the very first novel of said genre and idea.
Just going to say this off the bat, but no story, no matter how complex or simple the story is, is considered “original”. For an example, a vampire story, one could have a vampire romance, and try to make it as original as possible, but it won’t be simply because thousands upon thousands of people maybe millions before them have made a vampire romance story. All one can do is make it unique, give the character a unique power, look, and so on that is different from the others. So calling this an unoriginal novel applies to every novel in existence besides the very first novel of said genre and idea.