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Shujinko_Josei
Shujinko_JoseiLv122yr
2022-07-31 12:31

Did something happen to the Author? Why from 23 Chapters reduced to 1 Chapter? Are you trying to rewrite the fanfic? Good enough, I'll just have to drop this.

Rewriting #1

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I really don't get it, you give him all abilities and then he becomes a "beloved servant".[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]๐Ÿ˜”

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Zerus
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whether you call a slave "beloved servant" or not a slave remains a slave regardless of treatment though. the mc is just dumb or likes to submit to others and be their slave, he has the potential to become by far the most powerful being in dxd just by training but he chooses to become a slave. but maybe he'll become a new breed of monarch "the stupid slave monarch" or something, anything else would be an insult to Ashborn. So if you like an Ultra Beta Mc then this is your book.

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Antonio_Hernandez_9851
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Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiccccceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee I like the fanfic, the long word is because I donโ€™t want write a big paragrhap xD. ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…

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