Review Detail of brett_hood in journey for tomorrow

so I'm the author, but I won't leave 5 stars. I've read enough to know my book doesn't rank that high, I Also know I need an editor. I'm working on that once I get more chapters and some reviews going. also my word count is varying to much. 1200 words in chapter 1 then over 3k in chapter 2. I'll work on that as well, please leave honest reviews so I can make the story better. I have alot of ideas swimming in my head but actually putting them down for once is a different experience for me.