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Terminate0R
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Great story to begin with and I like that you actually include and make your own storylines lore and other stuff. With kinds the only downside is grammar I think you could improve so much more! Plus of making a hololive fanfic and as fellow hololive authors we helped each other!

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Thank you! Yeah my grammar really a mess because English not my native language