Review Detail of The_Crimson_Writer in I'm on TV! (Showbiz SI)
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Bit late, but since your rewritting I may have suggestion in case you need idea’s. 1) Have the fic set within a TV/Movie universe (Like The Big Bang Theory, Modern Family Etc) so you have somthing to fall back on. 2) I liked how the fic flowed, but slowing down the pace a little and adding more conversions between characters would help flush out the MC and his relationships. 3) There’s another fanfic I believe its called “Tycoon Actor in Hollywood”. It would be a good read for inspiration. 4) Lastly, Possibly have the MC branch out from just acting. Maybe into singing or writing. Laters~
I'm on TV! (Showbiz SI)
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honestly the charm of the story was that it took place in real life. so many stories insert you into that world and don't even really use it. Also since he doesn't have a system I think it makes more sense for him to focus just on acting. maybe writing since he has access to books from the future. I would agree with you that tycoon actor could be a good source of inspiration
